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Friday, 17 March 2017

Looking Forward To Autumn

Looking Forward To Autumn


I can’t wait to smell mum make Hot chocolate


I can’t wait to taste Apple crumble rushing down my  mouth


I can’t wait to see Roast chicken


Here comes Autumn


I can’t wait to feel Cold breeze going on me


I can’t wait to hear Birds singing in the black sky

Here comes Autumn.


4 comments:

  1. good job chelsea love your writing

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  3. You like all my favourite foods especially roast chicken
    and roast potatoes and some ham on the leg!


    My favourite dessert is apple crumble with cream.

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  4. Hi Chelsea,

    I really like your post about Autumn. I like how you added what you enjoy about Autumn. Maybe next time you could add detail on how you feel when Autumn is here. What gave you the idea to write about Autumn?

    Laura,
    Yaldhurst Model School

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