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Friday, 31 March 2017

Snot!

Snot!
Write 8-10 sentences using Wow words and similes.
1 sentence has alliteration in it.
Hook your reader in. (Make your first sentence interesting/ different)


“Urgh” OMG! That slime is gross! The liquid green scrambled eggs. It looked like a flat pancake that has been thrown into a pan. I was nervous to touch it. it looked like green vomit. It felt like a yuk mashed up banana. It looked like green mushy peas.It sounded like crackle. It stained my hands. It smelt like soap. That was slimy,smelly snot.  
by Chelsea.

6 comments:

  1. u wernt supost to do this

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  3. and by the way you are snotty hi five master

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  4. Kia Ora Chelsea,
    I think that next time maybe you could add why you had to do this because I didn't really understand this. But the poem was nice.

    Kind Regards
    Julia
    Yaldhurst Model School

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  5. Hi chelsea its Saxon from yaldhurst model school and I really like your blog post about Snot, it was really funny. How hard was it to make?

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